Services

Looking to fine-tune your manuscript before submitting to agents and publishers? I offer a range of editing services to help refine your writing and get your story into its best shape.

Query letter edits

For authors planning to submit their manuscript(s) to agents, a query letter edit examines your query letter for tone, content, structure, presentation, and more. First impressions count, so this edit will provide notes to help your query stand out. I’ll also share thoughts on the synopsis of your book for an additional fee.

Manuscript critiques

For authors looking for initial feedback and guidance, a manuscript critique analyzes your book's structure, writing style, and market fit. This service does not include edits to the text or sketch dummy itself, but it will give you a good starting point to work on your next draft.

Developmental edits

For authors who have already gotten feedback on a first draft, a developmental edit assesses your story's voice, structure, pacing, characters, and overall marketability in full detail alongside edits to your text.

Copyediting/Proofreading

For authors hoping to get a final or near final read on a manuscript, I offer copyediting and/or proofreading services to ensure your story is error-free. This involves fixing incorrect grammar and punctuation, catching typos and spelling errors, and reviewing your story for overall accuracy (looking for inconsistencies, checking against house or style guides, and fact-checking).

Authenticity reads

I provide sensitivity and authenticity reads, specializing in Chinese/Hong Kong/Taiwanese-American culture, history, and experience, mental health, family trauma, caregiving, opera, classical piano and choir, multilingualism, and Tae Kwon Do. This service includes an assessment of your manuscript to flag possible misrepresentation and bias.


Interested in one of these services?

Please reach out to get in touch about rates.


Testimonials

"Erin was fantastic to work with! Her feedback really showcased how much time and care she put into reading my manuscript. She was kind and encouraging yet didn’t hold back on where my novel needed work. Her notes and assessment letter were super helpful. She provided me with direction on how to make my novel stronger, ideas on how to develop my characters more, and lots of tips on where and how to increase my worldbuilding. It was exactly the kind of feedback I needed to bring out the best in my novel. I highly recommend her services and will be returning to hire her again whenever I need fresh eyes and professional insight. Thank you, Erin for a wonderful and thoughtful critique! I truly appreciate it!”

— Sharon Chriscoe, March 2023

“Erin is a thoughtful and talented editor who helped make my manuscript shine. She is insightful and deeply understands the children's market. She looked at my piece from various angles, and asked questions that led to AHA moments. I highly recommend speaking with Erin about your manuscript or if you have questions about publishing in general.”

— Jasmine Fang, September 2022